If the opening line is generic, the email fails. The reader has already made their decision about the email based on the first line, and no well-structured argument will convince them otherwise. Everything that comes after the opener is a bonus.
If a writer is effective, they spend most of the email on the setup: changes that the writer saw and challenges they observed. The writer’s request should be small enough for the recipient to agree to in ten seconds.
Email sales are a game of providing proof. The recipient is looking to see if the email is actually for their company and if the email is not a sales blast to four hundred companies. Two specific details about the company that you can get from their website or their last earnings note will be more effective than a paragraph of benefits.
If you go to a salesperson for a template for a sales email, they will copy and paste the same one every time. It’s the same first line with flattery, a question phrased as a pain point, three benefits in bullet form, and a calendar link. Buyers have started to receive a dozen or more copies of these emails every week. Now the shape is the identifier.
We focus on the best three closed sales along with the objection you hear most, as the email must answer that objection before a call occurs. The writer begins with the request and then works backward to the opening line that justifies the request. Everything that does not support the request is removed.
These emails follow your other communications. Therefore, you should avoid repeating the contents of your other emails. If the nurture track has already shown the reader the problem, the sales email will skip that part and move to the offer. We write these emails to reference prior communications, so they all read as one continuous conversation.
One rate, whatever the format: $10 per 100 words. You are paying for the writer’s time and judgement, so the price scales with the words rather than with a package tier.
| Typical sales email | Words | Writing | Fee (1%) | You pay |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Single sales email | 150 | $15 | $0.15 | $15.15 |
| Three-email sequence | 450 | $45 | $0.45 | $45.45 |
| Six-email sequence | 900 | $90 | $0.90 | $90.90 |
The writer receives 100% of the writing price. Our 1% fee is added on top of it, and 0.5% is donated to tree planting. Full pricing breakdown.
Yes — 2 rounds are included, for 14 days after delivery, handled by the writer who wrote the piece rather than by someone new to the brief.
Yes, by assigning someone who already knows the subject rather than someone who will research it overnight. If we do not have the right specialist available we will tell you rather than take the brief and hope.
We write the template and indicate the slot to be filled. We rely on an example email with your specific rep information filled in to show you where to provide the personalization. This is how we keep our workload manageable without having to fake researching accounts we have no access to.
We set the limits and the writer works to and within them. Most restrictions cover claims, comparisons and pricing language, and they usually improve the email by forcing specificity. We flag anything we expect will fail review before you send it upstairs.
Completely. Copyright transfers to you on delivery, with no attribution requirement and no licence back to us. Nothing written for you is resold, repurposed or republished.
Reviews from completed, paid orders in this category.
It now solves the issue of week three that some buyers experience when onboarding. We have seen a reply rate increase from under two percent to nine. After, I thought I could better it, but I made it worse by trying to rewrite it twice.
12 members responded to the first newsletter and actually had something to say about the framing workshop. Our newsletter had never received a response, so that’s the benchmark I’m using. The half a percent that goes to tree planting is a nice line for our members even though it wasn’t the purpose of our order.
I always struggled with creating the right sequence, but these seven emails move from helpful to salesy at a reasonable pace. The note on timing was a generic, boilerplate suggestion. I only bring it up because the rest of the emails were customized.
We do not ask you to take the no-AI promise on trust. Each draft is run through these platforms and the reports are attached to your delivery email.
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